My sister and I have started a new series just last night.  This series has nothing to do with Sailor moon because we want to be able to actually publish this novel.  I wanted to give you all a little sneak peak into the four main characters.  This series is based off of Earths four elements.  After reading Midori Snyder's Oran Trilogy  I was greatly inspired to write a series of my own using the four elements.  Hint a story called the Elemental Necklace Series: The fire necklace, the water necklace, the air necklace, the earth necklace.  But alas I have decided to abandon that idea and start something anew.  In a way I thought myself to be copying to much of her style where it almost became plagerism so I stoped that before it happend.  So our series will be along the Oran Trilogy and the Harry Potter Series. I can't wait to get started and share every step of the way with all of you, my faithful community editors.

As promised here are the new series main characters:

Pavarti Becile- (Fire) a young lady gifted with Earths elemental fire.  She has a sweet olive complexion and hair as dark as volcanic rock.  She may appear sweet and innocent but she has a temper as hot as fire.  She was born and raised in Hawaii where her father is a volcanologist, where as her mother passed away when she was born.  As the years progressed, her father became more and more absorbed into his studies, therefore Pavarti, spent most of her days under the hot sun of Hawaii’s exotic beaches.  A week after her 15^th birthday, she receives an invitation in the mail, offering her the chance to attend a high top school.  Knowing her desolate days are behind her, she gladly accepts the offer in hopes of finding new family and friends. (15)

Rosette Brunhart - (Earth)

Juliana Visconti – (Water) a young lady gifted with Earth elemental water.  She has baby blue eyes and long blond hair with natural highlights of blue.  She was born and raised in Mississippi where she lives with her mother during the school year, but travels to Oregon to live with her father during the summer.  Her parents are divorced, but hold joint custody.  Juliana hates going back and forth ever year, but until she’s 18, a legal adult, she has no choice. After she finished middle school, it’s time for her to enter high school, only one thing is standing in her way to becoming a freshman, her parents.  Her mother wants her to go to J Z George High School; however her father wants her to go to Rogue River High School.  As her parents constantly bicker over where she’s going, an invitation comes in the male inviting her to attend one of the world’s most desirable schools.  Juliana instantly sent back a reply, accepting the invitation in hopes of going off on her own and living her own life, her own choices, and her own desires. (15)

Lune Devoe – (Air) she is a young lady gifted with Earths elemental air.  She is albino with hair as white as snow.  She was born and raised in Alaska where her mother and father owned an ice fishing company.  Drastically her parents died one year in a fishing accident when they were researching a new species of fish.  Lune, however, was the only person in the party of six to survive the harsh climate of the sea.  Shortly after the accident she receives an invitation to one of the world’s most desirable schools, to further her studies and strengthen her newly found skills.  She gladly accepts the offer as a chance to start anew. (15)

As you can see I have yet to include a bio for the last main character.  We have yet to get that far.  If you'd like to contribute to my characters bio or would like to see a certain something happen in the novel please send me an email.  I'm all into accepting any offers or ideas.  Later when this is almost complete, I want to hire a good editor!!!!  whom I'd like to hire (meaning pay) who will also gain acknowlegment in the published novel.

My Emails:

rachel_selter88@yahoo.com
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When you email it to me please send a copy to two of the addresses in case one dosn't reach the other.  I thank you in advace for you help and support.

Links:
http://www.endicott-studio.com/bios/biomidori.html (Midori Snyder Oran Triology)
http://www.fantasticfiction.co.uk/s/midori-snyder/ (Midori Snyder Oran Triology)
http://harrypotter.warnerbros.com/ (J.K. Rowling Harry Potter)
http://www.jkrowling.com/ (J.K. Rowling Harry Potter)

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This is my story in which i havn't been able to get posted on AI so maybe I can get some help and ideas on it.  One of my ideas that I got last night was writing a prolouge for it to include her day of birth.

This is my Chapter one

Chapter One:  The Beginning

It was the beginning of a new era, and Taracova the Princess of the Nakomian Kingdom is becoming of age to seek her own court like her mother Queen Novia, when she was her age. Currently she was situated in the royal library reading about one of her favorite Heroines, Sailor Galaxy. The Library consisted of millions of books about numerous topics, but Taracova loved the section on the Galaxicans the People of Queen Rosalina. Queen Rosalina is a highly respected woman who cared for her people. She was said to hold the Golden Key and was the Keeper of the Golden Gate that leads to the Golden City, which she reigns. Taracova only knew little about the subject but when she had free time she always goes to the library to catch up on some reading.

The majestic library is elegant; everything was of the royal color, silver. The tablecloths and curtains were made of fabric with actual silver stitched into the pattern of the royal crest (a which means immortal). The tables, chairs, desks and bookshelves were all made from silver not wood. Queen Novia banned the use of gold over a millennia ago, when she first came to reign because of the riots of greed that had struck the city. Ever since then Bronze had been used for the city’s currency.

As Taracova sat on one of the silver chairs at one of the silver tables she had a gigantic book about the Galaxican language; Galaxican has always been one of the hardest languages to learn. As she flipped through the pages of the old book, she came to a stop when she reached page 2754, the section on the Royal Court. Her elegant silver eyes scanned the page until she came across an intriguing passage:

Reswon excson freen thourh rhe plaran lonk w wert ug ehltmertsneu. Next to it, it had the translation. Golden Power flowed through the palace like a wave of enlightenment.

Taracova kept reading and reading, loosing track of time. She had finally noticed the time when her mother came crashing through the library doors. *Doors crash open*.

Queen Novia walked up to where Taracova was seated. “I have been looking for you everywhere! How long have you been in here?” She looked at her daughter with somber eyes. Gently stroking her daughters silvery hair, she brushed it away from her face.

“I’m sorry mother I have lost track of time *looks at the clock*. I have been here for quite some time, a couple of hours to be precise.” Taracova closed the book and moved it to the other side of the table.

“Taracova you need to stop with all this Galaxican business. You need to focus on finding the right Senshi for your court! I know that you can do it and that you’ll find the right people. I just hope you’ll find them before your wedding.”

Alarmed Taracova shot her mother a terrified glance. “Mother! I haven’t even met any men-”

“You know that it is law that you be betrothed. My mother did it to me and so shall I do it unto you. Your fiancé will be here in three months, when the wedding will take place. I asked for enough time so that you may find your court. Now I want you to go to your room where some servants are waiting to change you into the proper attire for this evening. We have visitors, until then take care my daughter.”

Novia left the library leaving Taracova in a state of bewilderment.  How can she betroth me! That will defiantly be one of the laws I change! She carelessly got up from her chair without pushing it in and walked out of the Library, with the sound of her tempered footsteps roaming down the corridor.

The sun was beating through the windows onto Taracova’s frail body as she carefully paced herself trying not to slip on the glass like floors. Where is a fanning servant when you need one? I can hardly breathe. In the opposite direction from which she was walking a young dark haired woman was hastily making her way towards her. Now what does she want.

“Ah Princess, Anna is waiting in the study for you.” The woman bowed her head and waited for her dismissal.

“Thank you Bethany, tell her I will meet with her shortly. I need to go and change.” With the wave of her hand Bethany knew she was dismissed.

Stepping into her room three servants immediately surrounded her and began to undress her and to prepare her for the meeting of the visitors. The servants replaced Taracova’s everyday dress with a lovely evening gown. The evening gown was an elegant shade of lavender with the complements of a pearl necklace, a pearl bracelet and earrings to match.

“Thank you, that will be all.  Till this evening you all enjoy yourselves.”

“That would be nice your majesty but truth be told there is still much more work to do.” Said Edina her personal ladies maid.

“Very well, then see to it that it is complete by this evening.  Oh and one more thing, before I go, can you please open all the windows in the corridor and in here as well? It’s quite stuffy.  I’d like fresh air for when I return.”

“Yes your majesty.” Edina went to work right away.

Taracova picked up her handbag and left for the Study where her personal adviser was waiting for her.  Walking down the corridor she had previously been, she turned left at the cross where the two halls met.  Continuing, she kept walking until she came upon an elaborate painting of a young man.  The man was quite handsome with his baby blue eyes and dirty blond hair. “It’s too bad you left us father.  I wish you hadn’t.  I know you would never force me to marry…” she whispered amongst herself, then slowly made her way a couple more doors down to the study.

“Your late, Tara!” bellowed Anna.

“I’m sorry, but mother insisted I change because we have visitors!”

“I know, I’m suppose to escort you to the Lily Sitting Room, where they’re currently situated.  These people have traveled far, young princess.  So please make me proud and don’t shun them out like you have to others.”

“Hey! I had a reason for doing so, Anna! Don’t tell me what to do, remember who you are and your role! I will make my decisions. Now, no more talk, escort me to the sitting room now.  Then you may go about your business.  If I’d have my way you’d be unemployed for you insolence!” Commanded Taracova.

Without saying a word Anna escorted the princess, for she knew she was playing with fire.  Once they reached the elegant sitting room that was painted to the perfection of a lily, Anna left Taracova in the hands of her mother and guests.

“—Speak of the goddess… here she is now.” Finished Queen Novia of her recent discussion with her guests.

“Hello, sorry I’m late…” Taracova said all the while looking at her visitors.

“Taracova I’d like you to meet Lady Aria and her daughter Lady Zavalla.  Ladies this is my daughter Princess Taracova the heir to the Immortal throne.”

“It’s nice to meet you your highness.  I’m afraid I won’t be staying long…but my daughter Zavalla will be living here for quite some time.  I’m going away and I’m not sure how long I’ll be gone.” Said Lady Aria.

“It would be an honor to have your daughter stay with us.  Maybe we shall become great friends.”  For once in my life I actually think I will feel happy.  Something about her attracts me to her.  It’s not her appearance but something inside.

A couple hours have passed, which have been occupied with tea, small talk and the feeling of a friendship growing.

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So if you can help thanks a bundle!  Let me know what you thing

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